Title: Hey, good story!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon On: August 05, 2005 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, the name is Gallantmon of the Hazard, you might have heard me in stories like Digimon Worlds: Dimensional Endgame and such, but if you don't know me then it is no problem. Anyway, good story, I like Digimon stories, but I'm a fan of Sailor Moon and Yu-Gi-Oh, too. I can see that this is pretty good, but you do need to work on your grammar and spelling a little bit, however, that's still good. Plus, the two words/names that you need spelled correctly are like this: Orichalcos for names like the Orichalcos stones or the Seal of Orichalcos. And the other is spelled Leviathan for the Great Leviathan. I hope that this helps and I hope to see more of this story, soon. Later!
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