| "Between Theft and Lawlessness" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshy85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2011 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was sweet!!!! Im a huge fan of kurama and outlaw star. It was a twist I wasn't expecting. I hope you'll continue this story!! |
Title: Oh my god!!!!
Reviewed By: CatNeko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 11:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god that was funny please add more!
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 19, 2005 22:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
i loved this story .it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: haha all 3 chapters!!!
Reviewed By: Sabrina/ Sib sheridan On: July 24, 2005 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more!!!!! Sib: and i thought i had problems.. Sabrina : will you shut up??? im trying to convince them to write another chapter. Sib: well its not working Sabrina is too Sib; nope.. Sabrina: PINK!!! Sib: gaah... * falls to ground screaming KEEP IT AWAY!!* Sabrina: *looks down and kicks Sib's side* okay she is still alive.. seriously i really liked those chapters... WRITE ABOUT TWENTY MORE OR ILL.. ill.. Sib: * rolls her eyes* here we go yet again... Sabrina: well do you want to say something??? Sib: yes i do. great story. write more please or ill have to attack you with my claws.. Sabrina: God dangit quit threatning everybody!!! youve already killed a policemen with those things! * sirens are heard* Sib: Dangit!! they came back! Sabrina : well good story we have to run now..Literally
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Reviewed By: Katie Wehmann On: June 17, 2005 15:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It kept me entertened. I hope that you update soon! It was great!
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