| "loves raven" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ashantigurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
It is pretty good pu space it out more. and it is Mas y Menos
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Reviewed By: SpiderSquirrel On: July 11, 2005 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
GAH!!!!!!!!! THAT'S IT! THIS STORY IS TO FIGGING GOOD TO GO UN BETA READ! IM BETAING IT WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT! IT'S JUST TO GOOD OF A STORY!
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Reviewed By: ShirachiChan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey,Nice story,LoL.Update soon!o.o?...
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Title: Grammer needs improving
Reviewed By: Just-A-Random-Guy On: June 17, 2005 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's a good story so far. However, you need to speech marks to show where characters start speaking, and where they stop skeaping, just to make it clearer. You could get an editor to do that for you. Keep up the good work.
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Title: BETA
Reviewed By: Spider_Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 02:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, you must be a new author. It's a great story, but it need help. e-mail me PLEASE ASAP! at darkangel_o_death@yahoo.com___________ I wanna BETA (Buddy Editor To Author) read your story.
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Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: June 15, 2005 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
unfortunetly i have to saythis has horrible spelling and grammar errors... To be continued* and please put people talking in words under " " -.-
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