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"The Maboroshi Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: stix  On: October 02, 2005 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update this story doon.
 Reviewed By: stix  On: June 27, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this story is great. i cant wait to read more.
 Reviewed By: Tari Tsunami [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 16, 2005 08:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
There you go! I already sent it in to ff.net, but what the heck. Name: Tari Kikiro Age: unknown, 200+ Gender: female Powers: Tsunami: An attack that manipulates elements to create an acid tidal wave of colossal force and size Various ki blasts/acid: kind of self explanatory Weaponry: quarterstaff, simple and plain Demon or Human: Demon, half neko half water Personality: Well mannered and soft-spoken, usually has good advice and a tight rein on her temper. Description: Roughly 5'4", seems unnaturally thin and reedy. Her hair is extremely pale aqua, somewhat like the color of seafoam; kept back in an elaborately-styled braid. Her eyes are deep blue and slitted like a cat's, though very large. Her skin is pale and seems to give off a faint luminescence. She has long, finely pointed ears tipped with white fur and a thin tail that ends in a slight fin. Character History: Basically a jack-of-all-trades, she will take any job as long as it pays well for her trouble. Long ago she lived with her grandmother, a full-blooded neko demon. The older demoness was slain by demon hunters, who were in turn killed by Tari. Other Important Info: Her heritage is a touchy subject to discuss.

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