| "Vandread: Seed" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Qwerty-chan On: July 12, 2007 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cramped formatting, but the best lemon I've read so far. :D
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Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: spirit of the nightt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You saw potential in the situation and have written the best erotica story i've read while keeping the story innocent and the individual characters personality intact. Bravo
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Reviewed By: firemagnet On: December 02, 2006 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to congratulate you on this, one of the best 'lemons with plot' I've ever read, largely due to the fact that you melded it with the actual plot of the anime. After all, someone needs to write about what happens in between the episodes, right?
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Reviewed By: Vallaah On: September 30, 2006 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading this got me thinking. I just maybe will talk to my girlfriend and see if we both can do her boyfriend at the same time. Also I like to know if you planning on writing more chapters. I like to see Hibiki having sex with all those women on Merjeran homeworld. :) Please keep writing.
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Title: It Sucks...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... that you don't have more commentary from readers for this. Didn't see that coming with Goscogne! Nice ending, and the omakes were great - loved the one about Misty becoming the Nirvana "whore", and her reaction. I'll have to try your NGE stuff next... Ja ne. W.
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Title: Meia Culpa
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... for not reviewing the "in between" chapters since my last review (I did like the omake theater two chaps back!) as I read patiently, waiting for Meia's turn. You captured her once aloof, taciturn nature growing and maturing, first with the party she thought she wouldn't enjoy, then with her trusting Hibiki to give her the "exercise". When she held out her hand in friendship in the last episode of the anime, I knew that something had been built between them. I have an outline of a story where I pair her with Hibiki - don't know if it'll be a lemon or a love story without the sex yet... Love how you have the women clueless about the concept of modesty... they'll strip right in front of Hibiki and think nothing of it. I really hope Hibiki continues to eat well (to keep up his strength!), and I look forward to seeing how you pair up Duero and Parfait. Ciao! W.
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Title: Play "Misty" for me...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the way you've evolved Misty beyond the snippets we saw in the anime. As good as Dita's time will be under your direction, I can barely wait for Meia, as she's my fave of all the girls. Glad I found this.
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Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was just fantastic. Depth of characterization (love how Barnette and Jura talk to each other during), subplots within the greater plot... everything. Where are all the mature VanDread fans??? This should have double-digit reviews and I'm talking about chapter one! Only nit is the formatting, which, with more spacing, would relieve the compressed, cramped look. Looking forward to the next chapters. W.
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Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely Awesome Story! Very Erotic, Wonderful Writing Style! I LOVED IT! I am suprised that more people haven't written a story along these lines as I can see it SO easily. Although, I'm fairly certain that few people would have the cahoneys to write it like this! ^_~ Kudos! The only thing I would've loved to have seen was if Bart got some action. Admittedly, he was a cowardly schmo through most of the series, but he got a lot better after Shirley's death in 2-3. I think the Bridge 3 would've taken notice of him after that. I Love it! Keep it up! ~NekuYasha
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Reviewed By: Echoside [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freakin' Awesome. I await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I am kind of surprised that no one has done this story or a variant of it before. Good job though. I\'m looking forward to seeing what comes next.
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