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"Where Is My fairytale Ending" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: DrakeTheDuelist [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2005 12:02 CDT
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Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was cool. I'm not all that enthusiastic about HoroTam. Frankly, it just doesn't make sense. HaoTam is my choice couple anyway (which probably makes even less sense if you don't have the imagination for it). But hey, somebody's gotta' keep her company. And preferably somebody Tamao wouldn't need psychiatric therapy to recover from (I read "The Lust for Tamao" before...). And why switch back and forth between the dub names and the anime names? Throughout the entire chapter, you called HoroHoro both "horohoro" and "trey", and you called Tamao "tamao" and "tammy". You could probably get away with the latter part (not all that different, but a lot of writers would say "Tamao-chan" instead) , but in HoroHoro's case, you've gotta' pick a name and stick with it.
 Reviewed By: DrakeTheDuelist [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2005 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I see where this is going... A Tamao-themed drama. Thought it was an 'extinct species' of fanfiction until now. Do the genre a favor and keep going!

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