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"First Love" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Reviewed By: xXPandaXx  On: January 30, 2009 23:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Though the story has it's one originality it lacks the interest neeeded to keep a reader happy. The story itself was all in all very disapionting. I was expecting more when I read the title and the slight yoai warning. If I was a lawyer I would most likely sue for false advertisement. But I encourage him to write another but with his own characters and settings. I would gladly read and suggest it to all my other friends.
 Title: Sunshine and Puppies
Reviewed By: Sunshine and Puppies [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2006 03:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Different pairings can be done successfully to a certain extent. However, I'll stand with you about the general amount of crap polluting the Naruto fandom. Congrats on a well done fic.
 Reviewed By: Jeanne  On: June 27, 2005 13:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
PSS: How come no one's reading these stories?! Waaaaayy better than some of the nasty, cliche-laden, Naruto crap I'm seeing... -__-" Well, keep writing! (Some dynamic crack-humour might be in order though. Reading can get pretty slow you know...)
 Reviewed By: Jeanne  On: June 27, 2005 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aww, cuute! At first I thought it was going to be Iruka ("brown eyes"), but... lol, I think Pakkun really fits here. x3 The ending seemed sorta harsh compared to the waffiness of the first chapter though. PS: The green hills thing was too funny. xD

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