| "A Ningen Tradition" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I usualy hate storys where males become pregnant and what not, but this is such a well written story ^0^ I enjoyed reading it very much ^-^ It was cute the entire way through and held my attention to the very end ^-^ I enjoyed the way you described what was happening and the words you used ^-^ you have a pretty nicely sized vocabulary! ^-^ Though there were one or two easily overlooked typing errors as is with most everyone's writings ^-^ Other than that this fic is pretty darn well off ^^ thank you very much for writing such an effective and wonderful story ^-^
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: HieiLover2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was wow. I can't even start to explain it. It was really really good.
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 18:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniff, sniff* That was so *sniff* beautiful. I'm almost in tears at how sweet it was. *sobs* Wah! Okay so I am in tears, so what, wanna fight abou it? If it's okay for Hiei to cry then I can cry too. Even though he cried in the other story. For some bizarre reason I thought that it was Mother's day. It did kinda come off like that, in it's own way... I just love the little bit about Kurama not be allowed to cut his hair. That's priceless. I never thought about it that way... I mean the reason for Hiei not wanting it to get cut. Perhaps I should use that excuse with my lover. She wants me to cut my hair, but I don't want to. Cool, you gave me a wonderful idea! I am also anxiously awaiting the next chapter in The First Day Together and The Heights of Demon Love.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
very nice!!!!
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Title: . . .*stunned*
Reviewed By: liko On: June 18, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* i don't know what to say now...it was...*drum roll* absolutely wonderful. A third time over, you grammer and spelling is great. i don;t know how you do it...great job! you should get paid for writing these(but then you'll prolly get sued), anyhow...once again, i enjoyed it(happy endings are just good like that!)
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