Reviewed By: Blood Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2001 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry to be rude, but this idea isn't original.
Some time ago, my friend (Tina M.C.) created a site to host her art, and named it "Sephiroth's Pet Chocobo"
Finding this cute, I wrote a script-like fanfic, which is on fanfiction.net, and has been for many months.
Just letting people know.
And shouldn't this have a PG at least, due to the content?
This is in no way a flame, flaming is for lower lifeforms.
It is simply an informative comment.
Anyway, now for some constructive criticism.
It's a good story overall with a good plot, but it was lacking detail in quite a few areas and (although this may be due to the file conversion) the paragraphing was a bit off.
Please do NOT take this as a flame, or respond in a rude, immature way, because I have kept myself under perfect control and see no reason why this should erupt into an argument.
- Blood Dragon |
