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"The Perfect Trap" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 25, 2007 04:00 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was great!!! Iruka is going to kill him though if he evers finds out Kakakashi wasn't actually stuck!! Wish there was more!
 Reviewed By: Hillosipuli  On: June 11, 2006 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
KakaIru is usually not my thing (few pairings without Gai, Jiraiya or Lee are), but this was a delightful read. And that's high praise, considering that I tend to get bored if the pairing isn't one of my personal favourites. I really like the way you write and you get a lot of respect for keeping Iruka IC. Pakkun is also love, no matter what the circumstances.
 Reviewed By: Sahara Storm  On: August 19, 2005 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Tee hee! This was hilarious. Loved it! Kakashi's a sly bastard. :-D
 Title: Thanks !!
Reviewed By: Medulla  On: June 23, 2005 05:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A big thanks for having written this really good kakairu fanfic. It must be one of the best I've read so far. There aren't as many good kakairu fanfics as I'd like but this one has all I'm looking for : it's funny, Iruka and Kakashi are just cute and well charactarized and the Spiderman-like kiss is charming... Moreover your writing style is engrossing and very pleasing. I just hope you'll keep on writing on this particular fandom (pleease !) and that you'll continue this particular fanfic (I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship will evolve... Pleeeease !)
 Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 19, 2005 08:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aaawww, that was...damn.... ^___^You made my day. I've rarely read a fic that actually brought tears of amusement to my eyes, but this one did. I don't know how you manage to make your fics so perfect, but I'm glad I get to read them. Your first Kakashi/Iruka was already very enjoyable, although I forgot to review that one, I wanted to ask if maybe you'd continue it (or maybe this one). So.... please? I'd love to see their relationship develop, with all the problems, awkward moments and what-not that they'd definitely have. Blushing and shy but still strong-willed Iruka and sly but charming Kakashi are something I absolutely want more of!
 Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2005 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seems like I've been reading quite a few good kakairu fics lately. Yours is no exception. I loved the description of Pakkun at the beginning, it was too hilarious. And the end, I just can't get over the fact that Iruka thinks Pakkun's a normal dog, and the twist, it was good. I'd like to recommend three good fics to you, maybe you've already read them but I'll do so anyway. They are, "Side Effect: Heiwa Version" by messypeaches here on MM. "Stuck in the Middle with You" by cityneko on FFN and "Look! Look!" by Meleth78 also on FFN. In fact, all of Meleth's work is good, you might like to read them all if you're interested. Once again, great work! I hope to read more naruto fics written by you. Pixie
 Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in  On: June 18, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't normally read Naruto fics, but it's by you, so I had to check it out. It was awesome! I'm gonna start reading more Naruto fics now! I hope you write more...maybe continue this fic...please?!

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