| "I'll Be With You Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: comment/review
Reviewed By: Neospice12 On: July 07, 2005 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! it's me again i forgot to say update real soon! I'll be waiting patiently. Shaoron: She actaully is not a patient waiter. Me: Shut-up I am too a patient waiter! Shaoron: I can prove it! Me: How,i'd love to see that! (10 sec. later) Me: Will you tell me already! Shaoron: I told you, you didn't even last a min. (Kero flies in.) Kero: for once i agree with the Gaki. (Sakura walks in) Sakura: He's not a gaki! No more sweets for a day for you! Kero: No!!!!! I need my sweets, i'll die if I don't (Everyone except for kero sweatdrops, while Touya sneaks in.) Touya: Ha! i've proved it! THat stuffed animal did talk! *laughs manically (sp?) (sakura takes out the key and says the incantations) Sakura: Sleep card! Release! (Touya plops down and sleeps.) Shaoran: that was close! Tomoyo: Please update soon! I want to see and tape Sakura in her Kawaii outfits i made for her! (Everyone sweatdrops) Sakura: You never do change. Me: well, i feel forgotten. Well anyway update soon! ^-^ (Touya wakes up. And spots Shaoron.) Touya: hey GAki when did you get here? Shaoron:A while ago why? (they start to fight.) Sakura: Well update soon while we try to break up the fight. Sayonara, Shadowkatz-sun! ^-^
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Title: comment/review
Reviewed By: Neospice12 On: July 07, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO you're NOT going TO update, BECAUSE you WANT 30 reviews?! THAT WILL TAKE FOREVER! I just WANTED to SAY that IT was WONDERFUL! I HOPE sakura AND li GET together AGAIN though. WELL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Bye! ^-^
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Reviewed By: BETZ On: August 04, 2002 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason i rated you so low cuz i've never flamed anyone. (by the way the rating diagonally is the year of my birth and the day but not the month) If i wanna flame you i feel i ought to do a good job of it. So fiery card release and dispell fiery! I comand you to flame her!!!! Mwahaha fortune cookie crap! I happen to like cookies.. Grumbles.... |
Reviewed By: Kay On: August 02, 2002 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it! WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE I Need to know! |
Reviewed By: singasong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 11:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
First of all, I think you're being a greedy brat! Most authors are lucky to get 5 to 10 reviews, and your sitting pretty demanding 30, or else you'll cancel the fic because 'Obviously, if I don't get my 30 reviews no one likes this fic'! that kinda sickens me. Can't you just put out the chappy because you love to write? If I read any more of that junk I'll tell you what I'll do: I'll just stop reading! because greedy people such as you should not get they're desires unless they are earned.
P.S. if anything else, make Mei-lin a good person. She's been through enough bad publicity.
P.P.S. and I'm sorry this was a flame. But that is one of my pet peeves, and it REALLY made me mad. |
Reviewed By: singasong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 10:48 CDT
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But I thought Syaoran had brown hair!Raven is black! like, mei-lin would be a raven. Syaoran is a brunette, or he would be if he was a girl. fix that in you other chapters, PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Kinboshi On: July 02, 2002 02:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Hey Hey! The fic is comin along nicely. I am kinda confused... what did you mean when you said Syaoran understood when Meilin said 'Japan'?!?! I don't get it... oh well... maybe you'll explain later on...
Ja!!
Kinboshi
P.S. some of ur translations are a lil bit off...
E-mail me!!
Yuusukesadoll143@yyhmail.com |
Reviewed By: Kinboshi On: July 02, 2002 02:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Hey Hey! The fic is comin along nicely. I am kinda confused... what did you mean when you said Syaoran understood when Meilin said 'Japan'?!?! I don't get it... oh well... maybe you'll explain later on...
Ja!!
Kinboshi
P.S. some of ur translations are a lil bit off...
E-mail me!!
Yuusukesadoll143@yyhmail.com |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Blossem_Sakura On: June 27, 2002 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is a wonderful story.Please finish it. |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a good story and i think that you should continue soon. as for meilin, i think that you should make her a bad person who was umm......like....reformed. yeah!! thats it. oh well it is just an idea. keep up the good work! Ja!
Life Death Anime Inbetween |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2001 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is good but 1)she hasn't finished 2)she confused me about the flashback within a flashback thing 3)kero is annoying why'd she put that gaki in 4)she thought hoe is a japanese word but it is just sakura's word and it means huh. well dat's all i can tink of bye |
Reviewed By: Terry Li On: December 15, 2001 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good keep up the good work ,keep it going |
