| "And So It Began" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: and so it began
Reviewed By: inuyasha_and_kagome_are_ment_to_be On: July 09, 2005 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god author!!!! You are so good at writing!!!! I can't write as long as i did on your other story because then I won't have time to read and reveiw all of your other stories by the end of the day but let me just say, befor i go read and review your others that if your other stories are as good as the two I just read you wont be disapointed on your other reveiws!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting how you took the first episode and put it directly from Inuyasha's point of view. How did he feel what was he thinking during that whole time, wonderful! But if this was a true "how it all began" you probably should have at least taken it to when he got collared or when the jewel shattered. Or probably to the point when he finally started calling her by name. That would me interesting see the evolving thought process there!
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