| "[Kanata X Miyu] : Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Ray
Reviewed By: Rosamanelle Shilpi On: May 14, 2012 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i v just one word WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! BUT THERE'S A TINYMINI SMALL COMPLAIN-how come this syaron guy gets to kiss miyu so many tyms and kanata gets only one? bsyds dat, didn't those school bullies get punished and that thug captured 4 wat dey did 2 kanata ? anyways you are an awesome writer, and a romantic genious, so plzzz keep on writing and fanfics! KANATA X MIYU FOREVER!!! |
Title: miyuxkanata
Reviewed By: ahvs On: September 04, 2008 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This is want i'm looking for... although its already 2008, this is my first time to see this website...and thank God i found ur work. I really love your fic vvvvverrrrry vvvvvverrrrryyyyyy muuuuchhhhh!!! I'm already 22 y/o, and the first time i watch ufo baby is i think when i was first year in college (6 yrs. ago), Remember it was aired here in the Philippines every saturday at 7:30am... and we have a class w/c starts at 7:30am also... and for ufo baby's sake... gez what i always late in my 1st class. hahahaha Really this is the best anime i've ever watch...i cant even compare this to another anime... GOOD WORK!!! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Kanata+Miyu fan On: November 11, 2006 06:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's sooooooooooo goooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you'll make more. looking forward for more of yoyr works. The last one was really (x100) good! i really wish they had it in the anime. you really did a great job!
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Title: I LOVE MIYU*KANATA!
Reviewed By: AISWARYA On: September 29, 2006 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love that couple.I request to write more fanfiction about them.Not only that also other anime like Gakuen Alice,Cardcaptor Sakura,Fullmetal Alchemist etc. I hope you value my humble request!
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Title: miyu n kanata
Reviewed By: Teky On: June 09, 2006 04:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love bthis show very much
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Reviewed By: charlene-x On: May 19, 2006 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so NICEEEE-continue to writes more kay?this is so super nice!!Write more..omg..so nice..oh ya..anyone here knows the ending of DaaDaaDaa?so nicee-thanks..((:
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Title: Greatest ever!!!!
Reviewed By: Lady Miyu On: May 16, 2006 09:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I really like the part........well I can not decide!I like all of it!pls. continue working on making Daa!Daa!Daa!fanfic !
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: amruthA On: February 12, 2006 05:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it rrrrrrrroooooxxxxxxxx. the last chapter is sooooooooooooo romantic .and ge.. i wish it was shown in the anime. well anyway job well done and try yo write as many miyu+kanata fictions..,kay?
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Reviewed By: darkmage009 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 00:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
ITS THE BEST!!! PLZ MAKE ANOTHER FIC STORY FOR ALL OF US!!! TWO THUMBS UP!!!
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Title: [Kanata x Miyu] ; Aftermath
Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: July 22, 2005 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more!!!!!! i cant wait! i also like the recent story that you created so please update!!!! i am so thankful that i have found this website, have watched ufo baby, and read ur fanfic!!! i cant forget the story! not ever! I saved the story on my computer so i can read it any time i want to tell u d truth! just remember that many of us love ur fanfic!!!!! write more! write more! write more! sorry kung demanding ha! may more inspiration come to u! and u become like Mika kawamura! hehehehe!!!!!fanfic...fanfic...fanfic... pansin mo every once in a while nag co-comment ako sa fanfics mo? dat's bcuz i love it!!!! hehehehehe!!!!! tnx a lot!
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Title: Thanks thanks thanks alot!!
Reviewed By: Mika wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 07:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks alot! I appreciate it! meron na po ako [Miyu X Kanata] : Wings of heart it's a story bago umalis si Miyu sa heiomachi hope you like it like this one! salamat po!
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Title: [Kanata x Miyu] : Aftermath
Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: July 13, 2005 07:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I want to read more of ur miyu x kanata fanfics!!!!! i love it!!!!!! write more!!!! ma ku-krung krung na ako sa exitement sa story mo!!!! I love it soooo much! its like drama, romance and comedy put into 1 story!!!! 3-in-1 ba? just love it, love it, love it!!!!!! write more please!!!!!!! how's about stories before Miyu left Heiomachi? maybe... hehehe!!! ;) keep up the good work and I'm already telling my friends who watch UFO baby / daa! daa! daa! to read ur fanfic! its very cool!!! spelling and grammar still... enjoy talaga! kilig to the max hehehehe!!!!!u can do it! on behalf of all my miyu x kanata fans who are also my friends, u can do it! aja! as vivian kang would say.... :)
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: Mika wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 03:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks Pahhur reviewer this might help me improve my fic. By the way it's PROLOGUE not PROLOUGE and AGITATING not AGGITATING. :D
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 01:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
To begin, you do seem to have a strong romantic sense, there were some points where you showed this kid's affection for Miyu. On that, you more likely than not can completely cut the aggitating prolouge, and integrate it into the story. Let the readers learn about the characters themselves. Now, there was a couple bigger problems that I spotted in Grammer. (And if I spot problems in grammer, you know there is trouble... Mainly because my grammer isn't as precise as some of my co-workers.) The first thing you should work on is keeping all the verbs in one tense. You put the word goes, then a couple lines later put said. It is extreamely confusing, and very distasteful. The next thing is when you use a comma in a list, you need to put spaces, so that it doesn't look like one big word. The same goes for the pause (...) Otherwise, good work, and keep submitting to FFARG.
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Title: daa!daa!daa! fan
Reviewed By: MiyuxKanata4ever On: July 10, 2005 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
style is good...spelling & grammar... a bit of mistake but i understand ur plot which is very good!!!!! enjoyment...kilig!!!!over-all...super cool! i like the part when kanata answers the question about love. I also like the part when kanata wears the scarf and they all wonder what M+K means then Nanami says it stands for Mika Kawamura! that was cool! :) love ur stories! and I like how you put the end story of daa! daa! daa! into ur fanfic! and the names syaorun and sakura! also some of my fave toons! keep up d good work! keep on writing! I'll be waiting for that!
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