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| "Nightmares of the Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Nightmares of the Soul
Reviewed By: inuyasha_and_kagome_are_ment_to_be On: July 09, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite story because the author of this had to really think all this out!The author had to have an imagination!And you know what?That is really rare concidering the way people write they always take something and twist up. i find that this story had a bit of mystery,romance,action,fluff,and just about anything I can think of!I am SO going to recommend this to all my friends!I absalutly love this story!I meen once I started I couldn't stop and right now I can't stop talking about this story!As soon as I am done writing this I will read all of the stories this author wrote because to me he/she is the best author I have ever read about in MediaMiner : InuYasha !This is the longest reveiw I have ever written!I think I am going to use up all my space but that is okay because this story totally ROCKED!!!I am going to save this on my favorites!But author I think that you should like send this story into like places!I don't know anywhere you can make it known that you wrote this story!!!Because I am sure that if you make this story known I will not be the only one using up all there space!!You are an awsome author!!I hope you keep on writing,if you do I'll definetly keep on reading,no doubt!!! I just can't stop writing about how much this story rocks!You can use this review if you want to show the public how much " the people" love your stories!!But I really got to cut my review short becaus i only have 33 left so i'll make my point keep writing DONT STOP WRITING PLEASE! | Title: Nightmares of the Soul
Reviewed By: inuyasha_and_kagome_are_ment_to_be On: July 09, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite story because the author of this had to really think all this out!The author had to have an imagination!And you know what?That is really rare concidering the way people write they always take something and twist it around i find that this story had a bit of mystery ,romance ,action ,fluff ,and just about anything I can think of! I am SO going to recommend this to all my friends! I absalutly love this story! I meen once I started I couldn't stop and right now I can't stop talking about this story! As soon as I am done writing this I will read all of the stories this author wrote because to me he/she is the best author I have ever read about in MediaMiner : InuYasha ! This is the longest reveiw I have ever written! I think I am going to use up all my space but that is okay because this story totally ROCKED!!!! I am going to save this on my favorites!But author I think that you should like send this story into like places! i don't know anywhere you can make it known that you wrote this story!!!! Because I am sure that if you make this story known I will not be the only one using up all there space!! You are an awsome author!!! I hope you keep on writing,if you do I'll definetly keep on reading,no doubt!!! I just can't stop writing about how much this story rocks! You can use this review if you want to show the public how much " the people" love your stories!!!But I really got to cut my review short becaus i only have 33 left so i'll make my point keep writing | Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 20, 2005 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story liked the sureal atmosphere and how you presented scenes from Inu's past. though not sure if I liked the last bit of the nightmare. I would have liked it more if it had been more true to InuYasha's life. The last part of the nightmare should have been Kikyou healing and then betraying him. Though I guess you can't really do this because the whole point of the story is about how Kagome helps him, not Kikyou. Also, you make it sound like Kagome doesn't even understand on an intellectual level what life as like for little Inu. Surely she would have known better than to pressure Inu to tell stories about his childhood? Loved the story. Great work!
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