| "American Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: MarsStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 21:32 CST
Comment/Review:
You are doing a great job with your fan fic. I like the way that you have Gold and Yusuke act alike. It makes the story interesting. Well good job.
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're grammar needs a bit of work, you spell words correctly but you use the wrong words. e.x. "I hope I made the right choose." It should be choice, I'm guessing. But other than that I like this stroy so far.
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Reviewed By: animefreak123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story
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