| "Big problems in a small package" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: mpvssj5 On: July 25, 2006 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just a great fan fic its better viewed on ff.net but ur a great writer
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Reviewed By: Vegeta20052006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:57 CST
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hey your story was ansome now Vegeta is finally back to normal and his memories and his body is older so he is back to normal. Great story it was ansome and I enjoy it and if you ever make any more story. I hope it will be about super buu or as they say majin buu went he absorbed super saiyan gotenks and piccolo. That would be really cool to see if you ever make any more Dragon Ball Z stories again ok.
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Reviewed By: Vegeta20052006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey your chapter 38 story was great keep up the good job with this story.And hope to see vegeta back to normal on your final chapter that you are makeing. good and a great fanfiction story too.I hope to hear from you about the final chapter that you call back to normal
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Vegeta20052006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
because this story is so cool about vegeta and his friend and about that grandfather vegeta forgot. And his memories he lost we he self destruct and change some how to a little child again. And I hope he will turn back to older self again. and He had good spelling and good information in this story .
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Title: GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: goddessmuriel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope to read more updates from this one! I very rare for me reading fanfics under the M rating...so keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Kakujo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got to keep this up! This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. I can't believe how you we're able to think of this. Please get the next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: luna18 On: September 29, 2005 12:07 CDT
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I really love this fic. It is very interesting. You did a good job.
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Reviewed By: kisuna-chan On: July 12, 2005 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sooooooooooooooo like this fic!!! Please finish or continue your story soon! Pretty please with a cherry on top! bye kisuna-chan
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Title: Please Continue...
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I wish there was a little more romance, though. Please continue and finish!
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