|"Chasing the White Wind" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]|
| Reviewed By: Aya89 On: June 05, 2009 20:27 CDT|
| Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 12:01 CST|
Is that it? I wanna know how Yuki deals with Shuichi having someone else. Great story. coolsa.
| Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 10:11 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
I love the way you've combined WK with Gravitation, and in such a smooth way. Your story was exciting, tense and invigorating. The moments of romance were well done and I especially like the way you've written the characters. They were so real!
I really like the pairings and Shu-chan, not giving up his dream was so touching. And Ran.....wonderful.
You've really managed to capture my imagination with your expressive and emotive writing, right from the very first scene. You have a beautiful writing style.
This fic has so much potential, you've managed to create a wonderful AU world which I would quite like to see more of.
Each scene draws the reader in, promising excitement, humor and angst. But instead of just hinting, you actually provide scenes with the characters interacting with an almost delicate touch. Nothing is under or overdone. Each character has his/her moments and provides a depth to the fic which would otherwise have been missing.
I liked how you drew everyone together, and the protectiveness of the WK cast towards Shu-chan was so elegantly done. Not too sappy, but still with so much emotion which is normally hard to get perfectly right, which you've managed to do.
I look forward to anything you write in the future. You have an innate talent for bringing this fic to three-dimensional life.
It's so hard to find good crossovers, especially onmes like this, which meld two (or more) worlds with such ease and believability. Brilliant, really, really great.
Please write more soon, either add another chapter or a sequel. This is too good to simply leave as is.
| Reviewed By: Robin Terrae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 23:00 CDT|
Ne ne.. I love the extra scenes! ::glomps and huggles some more::
Although, why couldn't Aya-chan have b*tched-slapped Yuki? ^_-