| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pink Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFFY!!!!! must...read.........more!!!GAH!!! other than an evil cliffy, great chappie! ^.~ update soon ^.~
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: November 25, 2005 17:13 CST
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o.O :'-( I can't believe you did that!!! You must update in less than 2 weeks or I will be mad!!
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Title: umm...
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: November 25, 2005 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again, 3 days late. are you going to write more?
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Title: uh..
Reviewed By: kitten meru On: November 23, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the new chappy is a day late. i don't mean to sound mean, but, what's taking so long? this is such a great story, i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 19:01 CST
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Either they are really understanding people or just have very open minds. Since they meet Kagome they have been on adventures and learned a very long history lesson. Actually now that I think about it it sounds pretty cool. ANd Inuyasha got him O so cute puppy ears back. aND Sesshy is hinding something. If Inu is a hanyou then Sesshy has to have demon blood too. Which means Inu brother knows Kagome. But why doesn't he want Inu to know?
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Title: HaHa!! chapter 25!!
Reviewed By: tuckerman135 On: November 22, 2005 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read chapter 25 and i love it!!! Please keep up the great work!!!
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Title: Questions and something really funny
Reviewed By: Annua On: November 20, 2005 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you ever considered in being an author? Because you could change this story a little bit and the names and all,and you could publish this as a real story and not just on the computer!!! And did you know Keades name is spelled Keade not Kaede. And that Inuyasha's name means Female Dog Demon,and if they took off the last A off the name it would mean Male Dog Demon. Well I have to go now I have school in the morning and it is 11:35 right now so goodnight and I will continue in reading your story when the next chapter is up. --Annua ps.how do you write stories on here because I have been trying,but I can't figure it out I can write stories on fanfiction.net,but I can't figure how to on here?Thanks bye!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: November 16, 2005 16:57 CST
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Another great chapter, can't wait to see the battle chapter!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Lady Akina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was amazing! Keh...This chapter was really awesome! *blinks* Um...yeah...*anime sweatdrop* ..Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens! I hope they beat some Kuro behind. *nods* Keep up the good work.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Lady Akina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought she would take it like that! ^-^ Soo, loved the chapter! Please keep up the good work on the story. Can't wait to read more! ~Lady Akina
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Reviewed By: UpDaTe On: November 15, 2005 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update it was so good . update
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 15, 2005 20:57 CST
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I ran out of room back there if u knew me in person then u'd know i'm real talkative i annoy this one boy alot by always talken bout inuyasha to him!LOL i understand your point about the story eventually getting boring but you could start new stories about them (i keep myself busy by thinking of stories and art to create) so i'm INU crazy but good luck with the rest of the story i'll let u know if i have any more suggestions and i'll get an account on here soon and i'll hope you'll like my stories too but good luck to u!!
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Reviewed By: Articulate girl On: November 15, 2005 20:53 CST
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Thanks for the compliment i'll email u soon as i get an account on hear but i was thinking about drawing things about the story, so i'll try and get to drawing that stuff soon, because u know i have my "Insperational" days and then those "why did i ever start this?" here's a tip if you ever decide to draw drink some cold lemonade for some reason if the creative mind is hidrated then your more likely to do a better job i know it sounds weird but it worked for me! My suggestion for the end would be something like IF u decided to kill Kuro or get him sent to prison or something like that then a nice romantic scene for the end would be during the battle after they finally beat Kuro Inuyasha keels over and kagome goes to him concerned she has tears in her eyes and maybe says things like "Please Inuyasha not again don't leave me again" but just as she feels his heart sease she see's something that really shocks her in front of her she she's "HER" inuyasha and they exchange some words like i miss u so much or "I'll luv u always and forever!" and Inuyasha (modern Inu) is actually him (haven't thought about how but will let u know) after all these years he just didn't remember (kaede said he wasn't a rencarnation) so inuyasha never really died he just sort of dissapeared, but after there words are exchanged then he returns to Inu2's body and he wakes up in kagome's arms and the 2 look deeply into each other's eye's and kiss for a while and of course for kicks sango and miroku interupt |
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg...I haven't read a story like this in a long time...I haven't reviewed anyone's work in forever also...I love it so far. I'm still crying horribly...While I was reading this, I was listening to Probally wouldn't be this way, and I just lost it on the first page...your a really good writer for someone of young age...well, we're the same age so I shouldn't be talking...lol, well, update soon, and if you want...can you check out my stories as well? Just a thought...well, ttyl. Luv Ty
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Reviewed By: pickle juice On: November 14, 2005 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update and soooooooon, last chpt wasn't long enough...you should have inu read the story cause then him and kag can get back together...awww.
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