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Reviewed By: Inu's_Kag On: November 08, 2005 16:56 CST
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! This is an AWSOME story! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: KittyKat&Inuyashalover On: November 08, 2005 05:51 CST
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Hey! That was SOOO great! I really enjoyed it! My email adress is pbchick3292@yahoo.com PLZZZZ email me when the new chapter is up and PLZZZZ dont forget to write one ^.^ your really good with fan fiction
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha3292 On: November 08, 2005 05:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed your story. Pleae write more if you get the chance!
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Title: wondering
Reviewed By: Annua On: November 07, 2005 21:11 CST
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Great so far please email me when the next chapter is up and all my address is at bubblesinmytub2004@yahoo.com and I nkow it is a stupid email address my mom made it up because we couldn't find another one so enough ranting I like your story a lot!!
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Title: Just read all 23 chapters....
Reviewed By: Lady Akina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey....I just read all 23 chapters of this Fic and I really enjoyed reading it! I laughed and cried through the funny and sad times. Please keep up the good work and update when you can. I would love to find out what's Kagome reaction is. *Nods* Later. ~Lady Akina
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Reviewed By: Desiree Dee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will say that it was a little better, but a virus would have been more believable, plus it would have had a bigger residual effect. Still, it is better than leaving it unexplained. You might want to work a little on your flow of writing. You have your big moments down, and are good with cliffhangers, but some stuff just seems a little off. Like Kaede mentioning that the necklace wasn't as strong as it should be, but not going any further into it. Basically, it felt like she was there to make that comment then leave, and they showed up in her home. Next time have her make some tea or do some sort of busy work that doesn't make it seem like the other charracters are just forcing her out of her house. It is done a little too often. There are a few things that show up a little too often that if they were put into the show would make it a little less likeable. Shippo's parents would go at it like rabbits, Inu and Kag would seem to forget the mission and take every spare moment to make out, and the Inu gang would be complete freeloaders. Steer clear from that sort of thing and you should be ok.
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Reviewed By: Dragon of Darkness On: November 07, 2005 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i love this story you have to update :)
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Soulless Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is all I can say. This is so awesome! I can't wait for your next chapter. This story is truly wonderful, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like your new chapter!! keep up the good work!! and please please update soon
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i rally like your new chapter!!!! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Don't tell me that kuro is going back into the fudel era w/kagome. I hope she leaves hime there...lol. Great chpt.
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Reviewed By: Desiree Dee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for fixing the review issue, though it still wont let me sign in for it! Any way it's rare that I review anything, but I felt it needed to be done in this case. The first thig that I have to compliment you on is your wonderful formatting and spelling skills. I don't know how many stories I come across where the summary is the only part that a person can read without getting a headache. I would also like to say that your story idea was nice, but the whole thing with the nuclear bomb was a bit much. All I'm saying is that it would have taken a lot longer and a lot more money than the prize money would have offered. You didn't say in your bio how old you were, but I'm betting that you're one of the people that has high marks when it came to English. Overall, two thumbs up, and a 9.5 in my book. Looking forward to your next chapter!
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Title: AWSOME FANFIC!!! ^-^!
Reviewed By: Mad4anime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! Awsome Fanfic!!!!!! I love it soooooo much!!!!! *takes big breath* Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please *gasping for breath* please update ^.^! I think everything is good about your fic and I really want to find out what happens next!!!!! Ja ne!!!! -Mad4anime!!!! (LOVE YOUR FANFIC!!!!) *everyone starts to back away slowly.... (You: I think shes crazy!!! RUN!!!)*
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 20:01 CST
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The only complaint I have with this chapter--TOO SHORT!!! ARGH!!! I waited and waited, got going and it ended!!! ARGGHHHHH!!!! That's okay, though, at least you ARE updating ... unlike me.. I'm such a bad author. Anywho, great story, great plot, great angst, keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aw snap!! Another dun dun dun moment and another cliffy that is going to keep all of us readers on edge! Don't keep us hanging too long.
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