Reviewed By: Lady Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It good. I enjoyed it. A couple of things. First, Kikumaru has red hair. It totally took me out of the story. Second, there wasn't enough action. I didn't get the feeling that I knew these girls. I know who they will eventually end up with ,but not their thoughts. Other than that, it was great. I enjoyed it and look forward to your next one.
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