| "A girl for Kurama" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: July 26, 2005 23:39 CDT
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update.
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 00:47 CDT
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a masked murder? lol, i liked it. keep up the good work on this story.
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Title: Ha.
Reviewed By: Dark_lites [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 17:58 CDT
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I liked the ending to this chapter. But um yeah. I'm sorry to say this but only people that know he is a demon call him Kurama. When he is in human world he is called Shuichi. Felt the need to point this out before he met her parents. I feel so bad. It's like I'm flaming you once in one week... Sorry. -__-;;
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm...i read plenty of stories with Hiei going to school, but that's because Kurama blackmailed him each time. and K? kinda odd for me but it is still good, i have not read anystory that Kurama had to meet the girls parents it should be interesting. keep ot up.
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Reviewed By: Dark_lites [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel the need to tell you this, But Hiei doesn't go to school. No. He's like 600 years old. Point 2 Hiei would never call Kurama, K. kitsune baka, is reasonable, but never K. That's more like Yusuke. This is not meant to flame you I swear it isn't. Actually the story line is really sweet. I like it alot. It's just you have Hiei so OOC and don't say it. It gets to me I'm sorry, but I'm a perfectionist.
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet and cute so far keep it up. ^.^
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