| "Tea Leaves" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: iamfanboy On: January 07, 2002 23:02 CST
Comment/Review:
It was good, I'll say, quite good. Could've been cleaner grammatically; breaking up that big paragraph in the middle would help some... But hey, I'm a sucker for A!MS!
...Why haven't I written any A!MS fics yet? Lazy, I suppose... |
Reviewed By: Demosthenes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2001 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, tis a pity. Such a great fic should have more reviews... have you posted this on fanfiction.net by chance? It was truly good. I was especially fond of the good usage of vocabulary in the context of the story. (I don't see that too often) Anyways, excellent job and you should definitely write some more fics!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2001 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You finally made your way over here! Good! I love your fics!
SoW:
I love your style...but you already knew that. :)
S & G:
Overall good. Nothing too "whoa"
O/C:
Let's face it. OMG! romance isn't the most original thing ever.
EF:
(ew...Empirical Formula - Chem humor...sorry) Right, I love this. It's so...romantic!
Overall:
This is just lovely. I can't wait to see the sequel type deal! |
