| "In my pants" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: B.B. On: January 08, 2007 21:53 CST
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when i read johnny depp i laghed my ass off (he is my favorite actor). although that was stupid, in its own sick and twisted way it was funny. bien echo (well done).
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 09:16 CST
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That was the worst fanfic I've ever come across! -10/10
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Title: Well, hm.
Reviewed By: Phony_Osakan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta hand it to you, you've got a wild imagination. I'm just thinking that instead of saying "they did this and then she did that and then..." maybe it would make things work better if you lingered on things and described them. That is, in fact, what a story is all about - not just the actions, but the descriptions too. I'm sorry everyone's giving you a hard time about this one, they're being unnecessarily mean.
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Title: this stank
Reviewed By: this stank On: January 21, 2006 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only gave u a 1 cuz that was the min. rating ,and did i mention...IT SUCKS! [YOU NEED THERAPY![
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Reviewed By: ...yer a dumbass On: October 28, 2005 04:54 CDT
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You need help, and lots of it. This was bad, perhaps worse then bad. GO BACK TO MIDDLE SCHOOL. You MAY LEARN a thing or two about writing. Yeah, go back to 6th grade and friggen work yer way up again you low-life.
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Reviewed By: too lazy On: October 28, 2005 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the worst piece of shit I've ever seen. Pay attention in class, especially English. That first line, "inuyasha was shot by kagome...." the sentance following it makes it sound like Inuyasha's the one that had an affair with Sesshoumaru and had a kid. You really gadda watch how you word things... No, better yet, don't write anymore. Yeah, that solves things.
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Title: You idiots
Reviewed By: moorepocket [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fuckers are idiots its clearly the best faan fic ive ever read!!
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: September 08, 2005 19:55 CDT
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if there was an IY fanguild award for the dumbest, lamest, most pointless fic ever, this would win hands down. But there isn't, so this is just plain pathetic.
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Reviewed By: kioki_denize On: August 30, 2005 07:41 CDT
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that was THE WORST fic i've ever read. my dog can do better than that...
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 17:44 CDT
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What a freaky threesome and foursome!! a mother-aunt and father-uncle relationship is a bit weird. Who would've thought of this excellent fic that caputres the reader's eye? Therefore, this story is a must-read-again fic! Keep up the good work! Ja!
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Title: The Silver Flame Assassin
Reviewed By: Ookami flame On: June 23, 2005 20:04 CDT
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That *twitch* was so *twitch* Wrong *twitch*
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