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"Sad Moments" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Title: Live for a 3 time.
Reviewed By: SetoLover1  On: September 26, 2005 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yesssssss. I live from the hurricane, but died twice in the hurricane. First time I died, I killed the devil. The second time I died I got engaged to lucifer, plus I had sex with lucifer. 0_0 I SHALL NEVER MARRY LUCIFER,-__-* but he's good at sex. Update soon my friend, and write on. From a raped friend of yours.
 Title: decied
Reviewed By: SetoLover1  On: September 21, 2005 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I back from reading ch.6. Your chapter fits the story very well. I'm making my own story but it not make print on the net I'm afrid. It stars a 1 chracter from Tales of Symponhia, and the Cast from Yu-gi-oh. It a war in space venture. Pairings so far Seles/Duke, Seles/Seto, Seto/Jeoy, Marik/Seles, Malik/Ryou, Bakura/Seto/Duke, Yami/Unknown character(dies inbeinging), and Yugi/Joey/Yami. Twisted and alot of pairing for 9 chapters that I started Aug.18,2005. Hey I'm willing to convers about the pairings in your story. I can tell you right now taht there are a lot of Joey/Seto pairings right now and more is coming. There is not enough Joey/Yugi orSeto/Yugi. And no matter no long I've reed the Yu-Gi-Oh storys; I haven't seen a Mokuba/Yugi pairing or any other gay pairing with the charcters of Yu-Gi-Oh. We can converse this more in your next chapter, if my computer lives long enough when the 149 mph storm hits friday. Please write more, and I hope I can Read more. From love of the lover. P.S.: I'll rape the Devil and become queen of hevean & hell if I die. Peace out anime lovers.
 Title: Compilment thanks
Reviewed By: SetoLover1  On: September 21, 2005 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm finally back to my evil ways. I done nothing evil for 2 months now. I ***suppose*** to be banished form storys but I'm back to my sad momets. Still love the story. Thanks for the compliment Hikari Girl. You Rock to you new found friend. Keep reviewing my peeps. Setolover1 out and about. P.S.: Be gone for a few day due to I live in huriccane area thats going to hit LaMarque, Texas. I hope I don't die. If I due, I'll go to hell and rape the fallen angel Lucifer and the king of all evil and sins the Devil. Then I'll kill them and take control and be queen of hell. Peace Out World.^_^
 Title: More Please
Reviewed By: Hikari Girl  On: September 20, 2005 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it! It's a really sad story, but I just can't stop readding this fic.(mom is getting mad because spending to much time on internet)^_^ Enyway, I cant beleve there is onaly 3 reviews! This is an awsom fic! I hope you write more soon! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE DOM'T KEEP ME WAITING!!! Im sorry to hear that your parent's are having an argument. I know how that feals. Don't worry thoe, Im shure things will turn out fine. Now to thoes of you who read this fic, but don't review...DO REVIEW!!! Come on people I know you like this story, but wont review, but I promis that you will feal a lot better when you do. Oh, and one more thing, YOU ROCK SETOLOVER1!!! You got the write idea! Well I will be checking every day for the next chapter!!! See you then!!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: SetoLover1  On: August 19, 2005 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks again(Look down below first if you haven't read my earlier review to why thank you).*looks around of every author to see if your even there to hear her* I didn't mind you miss my birthday, I really won't you take your time on this story, and scences school just started to. I'm still giving you a perfect 20 on the 10 meter for your story. I hpoe you update soon.
 Title: Thankyou
Reviewed By: SetoLover1  On: August 18, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the shout out. My found out anyway that I read sex stories. I leting you know my name of your #1 fan: My name is Celeste Bellow. If you have to do so, do a Yugi/Jeoy or Joey/Seto pairing in the next few chapters if you can.*Hopfully cheering for a good yugi/Jeoy pairing* From a kind and care fan for life and new friend, continue to write and update my friend, your doing a great job of it. ^_~*Smiles and blushes* Oh yeah, thanks for the song "Runnaway". The song is perfect for Yugi and Joey. If you can find fanfiction story: Pieces of Our Puzzle, please read it and tell me how like it one of your chapters. I hope you become a true a Linkin Park fan. Finaly this is good bye, update soon, I'm looking forword to your next chapter.o~_~o*cries as she says good bye while she lisins to "Sweetest Goodbye" By Marron 5, and thinks a big THANKYOU MY FRIEND for a finaly and she leves the room to have sex with Seto*
 Title: Pain
Reviewed By: SteoLover1  On: August 01, 2005 23:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
You did a very, very good job on the storys. Write more, write more, write more. Please inculed a happy brithday shout out and a song called 'RUNAWAY' from Linkin Park in your story next chapter. My brithday is August 6. I would also would like to go by SteoLover1.^__^My true name is top secert. I dont wont friends finding out I like sex storys.-__-o*sweat falls, and she sighs from the idea of friends knowing* You can also call me CB. Oh, yeah I'm a girl, not a freaky gay guy.(Don't have nothing aginst gay guys, some gay guys and girls are my frinds)

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