| "The Adventures of the Teen Titans" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 20:00 CST
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Chapter 8: Err... If you focus enough, you can always feel the veins pulsing. Rather pleasing sensation, if you ask me. It proves that you are indeed alive. As for your story, it was quite brilliant. I love the way you discuss their strengths and weaknesses, and how they balance each other out. Your story, as well, balanced itself. At parts it is humorous, then serious, then sad, then happy. And with it all together, it adds up to a glorious story, like a many-faceted jewel. I look forward to reading your other stories.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 20:13 CST
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I really like your story and all (and no, it didn't seem CyRae-ish), but I just really dislike how long I have to scroll before actually being able to reach the story... It's discouraging.
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Reviewed By: sarahml524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 23:27 CDT
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This is an absolutly amazing fic! You've captured all of the characters personalities quite well, and you even made up a good reason for the theme song! I loved Beast Boy's flash back, and I hope you touch more into that :). Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good read. I have to say that at times I found it a little difficult to see who was speaking. I would suggest that you re-read your work and pay special attention to that aspect. Otherwise I thoroughly enoyed the story.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy the Gothic Egg [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aboslutely amazing. Your writing is just plain awesome. Keep up the good work and update more often!
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Reviewed By: Kai Hagara On: July 12, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dud that was soooo great i loved it. All i can say is that i couldn't have been better if i wrote it myself. GJ
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Reviewed By: Angel Caida On: June 29, 2005 13:07 CDT
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raiders of the lost ark dosent have angelina jolie in it but it does star harrison ford (drools...) as indiana jones, the one with angelina jolie is tomb raider. both the actors kick ass though.
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Reviewed By: Sapphiriana On: June 28, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fanfic!!! When are you going to add the fluff?! I love the fluff! HAPPY HAPPY JOY JOY! HAPPY HAPPY JOY JOY! (Sorry I love Rin and Stimpy. It's sad... *sigh*) So keep writing and stuff!!! -=Sapphiriana=-
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Title: Great one
Reviewed By: Jamer The Titan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was some good fic. I love the way you joined the team, and it was a very good plot. But you should care a little bit more in the detail, for example: when you said that Starfire could fire beams from her eyes, thats a little bit wrong, cuz she got the power of shooting beams from her eyes after becoming a titan. But dont worry, I'm not saying that your story is bad, as a matter of fact is great, kick ass great, but if you fix these details would be better, dont stop writing is too good....Peace and love... P.S:I'm haved writed a story too, its called "The sounds of the soul" if you want, could you tell me what you think?....Take care....And bye...
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Reviewed By: Just sayiing... On: June 25, 2005 02:33 CDT
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Just wondering, are u still writing the Legend of Zelda story entitled 'Fairy Tale' about Link being mentally ill? I love that story and I would love it if you updated that soon!
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