| "Sweet Sixteen" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: IronFang On: July 24, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous, just perfect. How else can ya put it it was just perfect. Looking forward to your other one-shots. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Josie(jo-jo) On: July 12, 2005 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved the story.(what else can I say)
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Reviewed By: kiki14 On: July 03, 2005 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I want to tell you that I really loved your two FMA one-shots. There was only one thing that annoyed me. You never put spaces inbetween your paragraphs, so it was hard to read. It would have been easier if you wrote them like this: Jljhfld fs dlsk dirpf kdjj i djf odfo. Jnd dhfoth h ay tiu fddf. Oifofuo of oi9few fydfdf fkj. IIUyti fh oifog oritu0 i o jhfgjhog. Idf fjoif oti pf jpei dsfg. O auh fu rghkjhvf uh jjj. Ofhg oah oifoafy hgoifh lkgj. Kj jarigaoih ajghaiuy kjh. Like that you know? That way it's easier for me to read! I would really appreciate it. Other than that I really really REALLY enjoyed your oneshots! Write more! Toodles!
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