| "FAKE in Love: Act IX, Vacations and Sensations" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: So very yummy
Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sexy dice and honey licking is pretty much the best thing ever. Having lots of fun rereading this series. I hope we get more from you. I'm a greedy girl.
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Reviewed By: jdr1184 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love lemons. I'm sure the plot was great. Did it have one? Who the hell cares? It was so yummy to read. Hot and IC. Ryo nipples are my new kink.
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Reviewed By: Jacquee On: September 11, 2005 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, it was a lot of lemons. But WOW was it worth it. No, that much sex wouldn't make sense for EVERY act but like you said, VACATION!! Plus, it's a good one to go to (besides the one-shots) for sheer fluffy sexy goodness with just a minimum of plot. You have an amazing ability to write, both sex and plots, detective and otherwise. If you were into straight couples and came up with original characters you could probably make a living ala Danielle Steele and all them. I really like how you've portrayed Bikky and Carol's budding relationship and I think they would make a fabulous side arc. Carol's designing and creating, Bikky's blushes and muttered comments... I would absolutely love to hear more and I just KNOW that you know what Bikky was saying under his breath. Again, you are amazing and I love that you put up whole acts at a time and update so quickly!! P.S. My fiancee adores you too even though he hasn't read anything of yours (doesn't know what Fake or the acts are about either). But whenever he's feeling romantic, he very sweetly suggests that I 'go read one of that Grumpy Demon chick's stories' while I'm waiting for him to come over. Also, he likes to very nicely tease me about them and the 'ideas' they give me (dice, date ideas, back rubs, etc) when we're together. So thanks from both of us and keep up the good work. Please! I saw that note on another review about stopping at Act X but please don't! You are amazing and your writing is exhilarating!
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Reviewed By: mm On: August 15, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It felt true to the caracters and the story was so hot. I really liked their game with the dice.
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. You just keep getting better. My eyestrain just keeps getting worse. Oh well, only Act X left.
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Title: You're Trying to Kill Us
Reviewed By: BlueSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GD - That was some of the most lush, creative, sensual and erotic writing I have ever read. Every scene left me breathless and every turn of the page had my fingers trembling with eagerness to find out what happens next. You have a TRUE gift for writing about sex in a way that is simultaneously seductive, descriptive, inventive and yet tasteful and elegant as well. You write sex scenes that are hot, steamy, detailed and yet always emotionally rich and in their way move your story forward. This Arc may have been filled with lemons, and yet you could still feel the emotional growth of your characters and their relationship as it progresses both sexually and realistically. You have tackled MANY things over the course of your ARCS - From intense and interesting crimes, to family relations, love and its resultant circumstances, the importance of family, the effects of homophobia and prejudice to the passing moments that happen that make life worth living. And you've done it all with skill and grace. You take us in directions that no other FAKE fanfic author has done before and you never disappoint when we arrive at the end of the paths you have laid out before us. I feel both humbled and amazed with every story of yours I read. Your structure and style continues to grow and improve, and, as always, I EAGERLY await the next journey you choose to take us on with Dee and Ryo. Please please please update soon! XOXOXO, BlueSimplicity
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Reviewed By: bfox On: July 02, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Better and better I really love the sex descriptions I would like to see more story and plot sex is fun but a little more story would be nice. looking forward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: GarnetKoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mabey this is sad...but i don't really care... the F*** factor is one of my favorite things about your stories...you put in just the right ammount for every situation and I love it. YOu should really try for being a professional author/ manga writer...I'm certioan that you would be great at it.Please continue writing...and i promise I won't send you any flames..and that i will hunt down the idiots that flame ya...because they're just jelous that they can't write as well as you... LoVElove loveLUv oh but in the future...please don't have them get interuppted as often (like in pat fics) bye bye
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, was all that a FAKE fic should be. Yummy lemons, crazed bad guys, a good mystery, and yummy lemons. Oh yeah, did I mention the yummy lemons? Yes, the lemons were most definitely YUMMY! Your fics totally make my day! ^_^
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Reviewed By: smirnoff19 On: June 28, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made me ache. that was yummy.. very descriptive. that's what i like most about it.good work
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Title: Beautiful and Sexy
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another masterpiece pure and simple. This was pure bliss to read. U mangaged to have a plot while still having a lot of lemons. It was absolutly perfect. Well done Lisa. I loved the idea that u had Dee and Ryo play that dice game. It was so sexy!! And of course, how could I not like ch. 5?! Ryo finally becoming very vocal about his likes."Fuck me, Dee" Wow. That was just hott. =P U do such great lemons. I felt so bad when JJ and Rose had to come and ruin their vacation, but of course that's what sorta started part of the plot. And that Henry wannabe kid...he should be shot. Thank God Dee beat the shit outta him. Anyways, u said it took forever to write, but ur hard work paid off!! I LOVED it!! I wonder what u'll write next hm? They still have those many positions to explore *cough* 69er *cough* Well I can't wait til ur next FAKE Act!! Again, great job on this one!! Keep up the great work Lisa! U are the best FAKE fanfic writer by far!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that ALL of your fics are amazing, and I wait with baited breath for each of them to come out. Lemons are so yummy in the heat of the summer, and I think you should keep them coming. Not sure where you plan on going from here, but I hope it is someplace fun with lots of Dee and Ryo. As strange as it sounds, I am almost at the point that I think a little Rose and JJ might not be so bad for the both of them. Keep up the good work!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Na (draechaeli) On: June 27, 2005 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the whole circle around to vol.2 it was good idea, the sex was fine. good story. ~Na
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: AnimeLore [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know I haven't reviewed before, and I'm sorry for that. I just wanted to say that I love your work. This story was absolutely awesome!! Sooooo much lemony goodness!! :-D I do like the plotlines, but I also like the occasional 5-chapter lemon. Keep writing! You've got yourself a lifetime FAKE in Love fan!! ~Lore
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