| "Beach, bikinis and Orbo" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Witch Huntress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Yawgmoth's Messenger, its me Sakaki's Girl. Anyway, I love this fic SO MUCH! Oh Please, sweet Jesus, please add another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Yawgmoth's Messenger On: July 04, 2005 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
like this i did. the witch's power at the end, well, i give it thumbs up on originality. that power kicks ass! :) also liked the tickling part. fouind it really amusing (cause im just that wierd)
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