| "Misconceptions" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: anoo On: July 23, 2005 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some weird symbols infront of all sentences. Other than that great story.
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: July 02, 2005 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY funny fic, I liked how you wrote it. But what exactly is the point of the '&nbs p;' that appears in front of some of the sentences?
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: July 01, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you want to keep this a one shot But I can see 2 or 3 more chapters as Shinji explains to Rei and then everyone else while Rei actually lets the idea of what 'intercourse" really means. this could then be expanded on in a 3rd chapter. Hope this helps! dennisud2015
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