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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going with story and add some more chapters to it and make it longer. It will make a good story.
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Reviewed By: BIG BLOCK On: July 25, 2005 17:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I THINK ASUKA SHOULD START TO FEAR SHINJI.SHE PUSHED HIM TO FAR AND NOW SHE SHOULD SEE WHAT IT IS LIKE TO BE ON THE RECEIVING END OF THE ABUSE.
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