| "You are safe with me" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: HEY its me again
Reviewed By: chibiruler1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
so now i understand the second chapter alittle better. It was really good and i like the plot idea. Does cloud like sora?! a oh! well keep up the good work and just so you know you have some spelling and grammer errors in there. Not many though so dont feel to bad . And also so you know its a sewer in the first district. So please update soon i would like to know how this turns out! good luck! ill try to get some of my friends to read this fanfic if you like it seems to need some more fans.lol well got to jet!
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Title: um.....
Reviewed By: chibiruler1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey i looked at your story and your summary (which by the way was very grabbing) but when i went to go and try to read your story i was alittle cofused, see i would have loved to read your story because it sounds like a good plot idea but.... there is no chapter one. i dont know if my computer if messing with me but you have two chapters but they are both chapter two! lol anyway if you can relay to me if this is a computer messup or you really dont have a chapter one and you will fix the problem i would love to read this fanfic. well email me if you update so i can start on your story Angelsspike123@cs.com
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