| "The truth" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: val On: July 13, 2002 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the fanfic so far and hope you write a new chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Ilean On: May 14, 2002 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOO MUCH! IT'S WONDERFUL! I WOULD HAVE GAVE IT MORE THAN A 10/10. THIS IS A MUST READ FIC. GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT AS SOON AS YOU CAN! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT WOULD TRUNKS DO! GREAT JOB :D |
Reviewed By: Anne On: February 22, 2002 04:57 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe, great fic, give me more (drools selfishly) pleeeeeease............ =( |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2002 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wish people would stop threatening to stop writing if us readers dont add reviews...but well i understand why you need to know if you wrote a nice story...
I think the story was very well written and showed a lot of insight in the various relationships within the dragonball universe...please continue! |
Reviewed By: butterfly On: February 02, 2002 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay :P :) u got me addited to this story now :) :):):):):):):):):) (as u can tell i luve dbgt even though i have never seen the seires only a few sagas of dbz, u no u are a really good author, plz write more :D
butterlfy |
Reviewed By: butterfly On: February 01, 2002 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story, how long till the next one up ^^ yay, i luv t/p and b/g fanfics and this one is awesome, ^^. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2001 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
:) if there's any other couple i had to choose besides vegeta and bulma, it would be trunks and pan. your fic is pretty cute so far, can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Jehosi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2001 22:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I like what you have so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
