Reviewed By: Aneje On: September 09, 2005 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The concepts were well thought out and I quite enjoyed them in the stories, however...you must be sure to thoroughly proof-read your material before publishing. I say this because at many times your grammar was incorrect. But that's okay, sometimes it happens, as a fellow writer I understand, but just to be sure...as a tip; try reading your stories carefully "outloud" to yourself. See if they "sound" right. I notice you mix past and present tense together in your writing, a big no no, for it gets confusing after a while. Again, great concepts, just be aware of your grammar. Good luck! And Lovely stories! Keep it up!
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