| "The Final Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonpixie14 On: July 05, 2005 21:26 CDT
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well its a little confusing but realy ggod so far keep up the good work if possible email me when you update (dragonpixie14@aol.com) it i would like to know what happens next. thanks dragon
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Reviewed By: NiceGirl On: July 05, 2005 13:33 CDT
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That was sad. For people to see a love on die. It's just to nervrecking. Please write more.
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 02:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story you have. Gryffindor now has two legends residing within its house, so cool. I'm surprised Shippo and Kirara weren't mentioned in your brief summary, but I'm sure you have something planned for them. {And if you don't, I won't tell =X} As for your comment about lime, bring it on. Ja ne ^.~
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Reviewed By: Meshomah On: July 04, 2005 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally loving your story! I've really enjoyed reading the first three chapters! Please update soon!
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Title: Review Prologue/Chapter One.
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun (who can't sign in right now) On: July 02, 2005 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is really good. I like how you've taken an old premise (transferring) and mad it not so cliched. ............................... ...................... The perfect, most favorite line from this chapter: "'Where on earth did you get that scar?!'" Oh, I can't wait for their reaction to that. This is really great, please keep up the writing and the good work.
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