| "Pactio" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: So cute!
Reviewed By: chibi_luna_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 00:50
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Kawaii! I just started watching Negima, but already I like this coupling. Their so cute!
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Title: F.A.R.G
Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 20:48
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So cute! The colouring is smooth and efficiently done. There could be a little extra shading on the faces but other than that, I like it -F.E*
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Title: Avast! FARG!
Reviewed By: Neko Oni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 22:30
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The pic is really nice and clean --the line art and shading... which is nice. I think maybe the line art needed to be reinforced a bit (a little darker in some spots), and perhaps a few more secondary colours added in to boost some detail in the pic. The light at the bottom doesn't fit the rest of the pic, I think if you did it using the same way you did to shade the pic it would of fit better. But other than that, it's nice, and such a sweet pic. ^_^
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Title: FARG
Reviewed By: Sonicwind123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 10:17
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I think it is a great picture, but I have to agree with Dee in that the light at the bottom does not really work because it takes the viewer away from the focus of the picture other then that it is really good.
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Title: ArG
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 13:00
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I don't really like the light at the bottom. I think it's awkward when paired with the rest of the picture, which has very dark colors. Overall though, I think it's cute. There are so few kissy pictures. ^_^ But when done like it is here, it's pure and sweet. Despite the glare, I think you know what you're doing when it comes to shading and what not, so my congratulations.
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Title: F.A.R.G.
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 02:42
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You did very well on the line art. I love the spects (glasses). I don't like the glare on the bottom. It overshadows the coloring and draws the eye away form the main theme of the image, the kiss. I would take that out, give the image the balance and contrast it should have and then I'd be a little more daring with the 'halo' on the left hand character. I'd also add a set of lines and 'blush' under the eye, the look is great the blush would reinforce it.~Fanilia
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Title: ARG ;)
Reviewed By: Bizmarck [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:26
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Songie(NLI) picked 'everything' I was going to say... darn it ;-)... oh well nothing left to do but say "booya!" love a good snog picture... ;-) nice work. looks to me like cell work.
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Title: F.A.R.G. Baby!
Reviewed By: Songie(NLI) On: July 12, 2005 15:37
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Dag gammit everyone does such awesome line art. Frizzle Frazzle. Well onto the real topic, you really achieve a cel coloring that makes this look really anime style. I like the lights at the bottom because it really depicts what's happening and you know that that kiss is magical and starting another one of those attack cards he always gets when he's kissed. Your hand looks really good and truthfully if you had made this smaller and put them on a bridge you could have submitted this into the fanart contest and could've placed. I think the only really touch you need to do was give them a little more of a blush because you know anime characters always blush when their kissed. Her hand looks awesome and the facial expressions are great. The shading is awesome. Oh I just noticed one more thing... is his glasses really that small? Or did his eyes get really huge because she kissed him. That does look a little strange. Hmmmm... other then that excellent work! ^_~ Songie
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