| "Loving Fuu" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: finkbird [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 05:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Hi everyone
Reviewed By: GothicaCuddle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok.. its J-I-N pronounced G-E-N-E... Ok.. Like J-E-A-N.. now that THATS out of my system.. If ANYONE wants to proofread and correct grammar and spelling. i would be forever in your debt! i cant do that well enough.. i only write.. i dont check things.. if anyones wants to! email me, gothica_cuddle@yahoo.com Thank you! and glad all of you enjoy the fic and i havent gotten much in the flame department.. -grumbles and starts writing-
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Title: ummm
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_fan89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok here is the deal it is supposed to be Gene not jin isn't it...that is what the show says and a lot of other fanfics on other sites and you need to check your grammar and spelling i paid more attention to that then anything it is a wonder ful story but i mean reread everything before you post it......thank you!!! i will write another review later!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers (it wount let me on!!!!) On: August 22, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya new chapys! did you know that this is the only Samurai Champloo fic i have ever read? i have to say its a good first experionce
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Title: great
Reviewed By: dudette [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter...jin and fuu..gonna get freaky soon lol...they would look goo cute together...well keep up the good work..there arent many sc ff's
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Reviewed By: Kathryn On: August 14, 2005 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This ll has me on the edge! Hurry up and write the next chapter! lol While your style of writing is great, you are not using your synonyms the correct way. In one sentence you said 'then' whereas instead it should have been 'than'. just work on that, otherwise I really liked it. So again, HURRY UP AND WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! lol. ^_^
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Reviewed By: curly 211 On: August 02, 2005 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
More please!
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Reviewed By: dudette [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great start please continue
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Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
more more! there aren't very many SC fics and this one is very good!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic please continue also the only complant i have is that the chapters are kind of shory buy other than that i rlly like it
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Title: veyr nice
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that you continue along with this story I really like it and am impressed by your portrayal of their feelings.
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Title: mooo
Reviewed By: mooshii On: July 23, 2005 23:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool. keep writing.
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Title: Similar
Reviewed By: DjRomeo On: July 23, 2005 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has many similarities to the first episode i saw of Samurai Champloo. I think it was the Higone' Checkpoint, or somthing like that. Mediocre story, it could be longer and have more of a plot though. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: morwen_re, not logged in On: July 22, 2005 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job so far, i want to see more of this fic, so please update again soon? please?
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Title: Ayannna
Reviewed By: Butterfly_ayanna On: July 13, 2005 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi There !!!! Love The Story, I try my best to found stories with the trio wanting each other.But there so hard to find....I've seach the web and found Mugen/Jin fanfiction stories there not that hard to find.I would not minded if Fuu was included...But like I said here hard to find. So Thanks for the story, I know for right now I'm our only review but I hope that you update ASAP.Because this is one reader that would be dispointed if you don't ;)Thanks Please update soon!!!!!
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