| "Aduration (A Union or Combination into One)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha (nli) On: August 11, 2005 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, woah, awesome. It's hard for me to talk after such a great fic. I'm certainly not just given you tens because I liked them (even though they are nice). You an awesome writer, and I'm even jealous that you're so good at writing. It almost makes me just like a complete moron. *Lol* But it any case, this story is... how to put this? It's one of the best - if not the est- stories I've ever read. And it was a bonus with the RusselxEdward pairing. I love how they aguring even when in bed. Hah! I really hope you do a sequel or something similar. You've got major talent and it's cool that you use it well. You're definitely going on my fav authors! ~Ja ne!~
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Reviewed By: forever broken (not logged in) On: August 01, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! It is so realistic! especially the way they keep bickering and arguing. and I like the way you put it in Russel's point of view! it's really different than other stories! I've never read such a good story about those two! also I like the coupling a lot more now. I began reading this story.. that it had to be okay.. but now I think it is really awsome! please write more stories and please a sequel or something.. (weird request: btw I know not many people are into the greedxkimbley couple.. but seeying the way you write and I really loved the lemons, do you think you could write such a story.. not many people write them..and I really think there should be more.. so if you ever are up to a new couple?!) anyways loved the story!!!
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Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
*applauds madly* A realistically-written relationship between these two, thank you! I love how they're still arguing, even in bed. And you write the lemons so very well too... mmm... Do you have a sequel planned? ^_^
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