Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2010 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
It has potential. But you have to continue on with it. You need more before I can say it is a good piece. However, the first chapter is good, though you skipped over some good parts, like what their first night in bed would have been like but oh well. I'm curious what you will do with this fanfic and hope you update soon.
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