Title: sweet and sexy Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 14:17 CDT Comment/Review: I only gave it a 9 for enjoyment factor because I want more. lol I love this pairing so much and I love that you handled it sweetly, not crass at all. Even when Gojyo spoke dirty, it fit, it didn't seem out of place, like him being his lascivious usual self. Not sure how you can add to the story, as it seems complete, but the story leaves you wanting more nonetheless.
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