| "Business Matters" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: lela0229
Reviewed By: pink_princess18 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope you update this fic soon dont be discouraged by ungrateful people who dont review cuz im really diggin ur writing
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Reviewed By: saiyaN pRiceSS On: December 09, 2006 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a very good story teller your story flows very smoothly ^_^
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Reviewed By: getazgurL On: December 03, 2006 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best fic i've read here in a while very creative keep up the good work please update
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Reviewed By: pink_princess18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic keep it up! please update that raditz vegeta bit was halarious
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting take on B/V story, up date soon, its quite good
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Reviewed By: pinkrocks On: November 27, 2006 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story so far Vegeta's personality is perfect and overall the story is very funny. i hope you update soon. I'm realy sorry inconsiderate readers discourage good writers sometimes. i just wanted to let you know ur really good. Gambatte Kudasai.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta is an evil boss as we knew he would be. I like it. It was a good balance how Bulma liked screamed at Yamcha and then let him down easy. Good job.
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far so good, and funny too. How will Yamcha die this time? More please
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