| "Hanabi" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Ummm...
Reviewed By: TerraChrono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is anyone else aware that this was rated R when it should be NC-17?
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 05:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't find a fault to find with this fanboy, it was beautifully paced, and the descriptions were perfect just perfect. It is so long since i played the game that to start of with, i was having trouble to remember, but soon found myself shouting out "Shit! I'd forgotten about that!"
The diguise bit got me laughing as i remembered clouds cross-dressing at the start of the game. Well *ahem* this gets a 10 out of 10 in my opinion, you write the best lemons :) |
Reviewed By: Rena Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2002 03:27 CST
Comment/Review:
"Congrats!" Says the hentai in training, "You are the writer of the first yuri I've ever read!"
Everyone gets all the good points in before me, and I hate being repetetive... 'sides... you know I like your stuff.
So... finally got the courage to read it, and *liked* it. That has to say a lot. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Fanilia On: January 07, 2002 19:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I agree with Ducey very nicely written, and the story flowed from beginning to end. I can't say much on the content as I have never read a lemon of this type before, so nothing to compare it to. But the way the whole thing progressed was believable, and that is a complement since you are a male writing intimately about two females. I don't believe I could write as convincely about two males. |
Reviewed By: Dezz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2002 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. It flows really well which is what I mainly look for when reading a fic. I liked the whole twist on Aeris' character. It done to a degree that it was believable for the character. Good job. =) |
Reviewed By: Duece of Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2002 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I couldn't find any spelling or grammitical errors, and it was good.
Er...yeah. You already know that I think you write well, and the lemon is no exception. It's well written, and the characterization isn't nearly as botched (If it's botched at all) as you thought it might turn out.
-Duece |
