Reviewed By: IXthy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very interesting piece of fiction. I've very much enjoyed your characterisations and the ingenious handling of the plot. You've managed to create (or rather develop, as we'd known Andrea from before) a villain who is credible and whose past actions fit with the current plot, a rather rare thing these days, and managed to keep the protagonists in character as much as possible. I have only praise for your work on this story and if there's one thing to add it's that I hope you won't forget about it and about adding those last chapters. I know muses are fickle things so I'll just wish you this: "May your muse shower you with inspiration - always." Lady Indolence (aka IXthy).
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