| "You Want Me to Do What?" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Samus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 16:00 CDT
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Very amusing indeed. I read it out of curiosity and enjoyed it quite a lot. You should write about something a bit more lengthy next time. It was funny how the orbs argued all the time.
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Title: A nice change of pace
Reviewed By: Sleepingbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm a little outside my original fandom here. I'm a wee bit lost actually. In the case of your fic I would have to say I'm glad of it. I rather liked the purple orb character and the contrast the orange orb provided. It wasn't a long fic, but that's alright, since you told the whole story. It's a little known fact that short stories can be harder to write than novels. Also, it was ever so nice to see proper spelling, grammer and punctuation. These are things I would make mandatory in all literature forms if I were the worlds great rule creator/enforcer. And I would wear great big black leather jack boots and all would tremble before me. Ahem. Sorry, too little sleep.
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Reviewed By: SakuraSyaoran4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 19:26 CDT
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*grins* it was really good (and the ending was preety funny). Though maybe it could've been longer... |
Reviewed By: Dilandaus_girl,Tayles,Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2002 18:17 CST
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added to above review. I am signed in wrong again, this is Fanilia |
Reviewed By: Dilandaus_girl,Tayles,Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2002 18:15 CST
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I am so lousy at reviews, but I needed something to cheer me up tonight, and this did the trick. The only thing I found that wasn't quite right was that you changed from refering to them as orbs to globes. It made me think of such shows as the orginal Star Trek, and the recent Harry Potter movie. We humans do seem to be obsessed with aliens wanting us to play games.**Tell Root to add a spell checker to the review box since I can't spell** |
Reviewed By: Anorexic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 10:03 CST
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Making fun of cliches is always good, and this turns out to be no exception. You've managed to mock "The Most Dangerous Game" spinoffs (which aren't nearly as good as the original) and the omnipotent being's game. I like.
OK, this is just my facts mode that no one really cares about and probably ticks a few people off, so don't take it personally. It's just a quirk. I don't think hydrogen dioxide (HO2)is even possible. Dihydrogen monoxide, maybe? |
Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 03:02 CST
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^_^;;; that review... didn't sound as nice as I meant it to... I guess that I'm for being good at sounding nice tonite... |
Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 03:00 CST
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I can definitely say: Cute. I liked it. Not too fluffy; it was maybe a bit too quickly paced in some parts; but other than that... |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2002 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, this was good. The beginning was a little weak. The fact that you overused the word sphere, especially in the beginning, did get tiresome, but didn't make me not want to read the story. Stacey's initial reaction was also a little unrealtic. Instead of "You're from another world, aren't you?", maybe something like her jumping up in surprise, etc. It may just be that that is the reaction you as the creator of Stacey felt she would have.
I won't dwell on that, but I thought I'd mention it. Other than that, I have liked it thus far. I look forward to completing it and hopefully giving you some more comments.
Good job! A cute piece that has roots in the basic anime plot of best used in Urusei Yatsura, but certainly can stand on its own two feet. |
