| "Crucify" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Scream_at_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 15:24 CDT
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*cries* You re-wrote it!!! *pause* YAYAYAYAYAY~! Please write more soon! I love ur stories~
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYoko'schick (too lazy to log in) On: September 24, 2006 19:43 CDT
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From what I understand you removed some chapters at least that is what previous reviews say but you have a very interesting introduction. Please continue to update as soon as you can^_^
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Title: ????
Reviewed By: hieisdarklover On: August 20, 2006 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue this story its the best one ive every read in two years and i really like your creativity so please continue writing this
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Title: Lol
Reviewed By: SuicideIsMyCure [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 03:39 CDT
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So far I've gotten to where Kurama made the milkbud things. Lava is really whiny and demanding isn't she? It's so funny!!! Hiei is all uneasy, I feel sorry for him! ^_^ I'll keep reading them!!! ^_^ It's really good!
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Reviewed By: Piko On: January 30, 2006 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT?Your stoping?Oh please please please,PLEASE don't stop there.I hate cliff hangers.And im already making endings for all those other stories that aren't finished.I don't want to do another one.So please don't stop. =( .I love this story by the way.=)
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Reviewed By: Hi On: November 30, 2005 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't stop writing your story! It's awsome!! You have such creativity! Your story is so origanal! I really really like it! Everyday I come home and look forward to reading more of your story and now you say you're going to stop writing?! Keep going!!! Ok. Now let me give you an expilnation on my ratings. Your spelling and grammar was a bit iffy, but you must be buisy and it's not like I can't figure out what you are trying to say through your story. Anyway, don't get discouraged because you're not getting a lot of ratings. People are enjoying your story so much they want to keep reading to find out what happens next instead of pausing to write a rating. So I hope you are encouraged and I hope you complete this story very soon!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko Erene On: September 19, 2005 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, this is a damn good story! One of the best i ever read, so I can't wait to see how it ends. Hope you'll get to end it soon! :D Keep up the good work!
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Title: Crucify
Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: September 18, 2005 03:05 CDT
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Sorry I didn't review for the latest chapters...hehehe school's got me too....and it is f-ed up. Well anyways great chapters so far and I hope you get out of writer's block soon. Well anyways update and if you have a sequel after this one ends tell me about it. Can't wait for the next chapter Hiei needs to kick Crow's ass!!! -InTheShadows.
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Title: Crucify
Reviewed By: InTheShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 16:08 CDT
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Oh yea you're welcome!!! Oh yea this chapter was great!! Love to see a pissed off Hiei!! ^^ Well I can't wait to see what happens to Lava and her twins. Well update soon!! Hope you don't have writer's block for long!!! -InTheShadows
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: September 11, 2005 01:19 CDT
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I think the title should be Crucify because Crow treats Lava cruelly, He does it by defeating, tormenting,and victimizing her in a through and cruel way. But that is just me....lol hehe seems I'm the only one to think up a name....great story by the way this is the review for the chaps that I missed for a week ^^ Well keep up the good work I love this story!!! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: Velvet Diamond On: September 07, 2005 05:07 CDT
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I love your story. Please keep going. Can't wait to read the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story please up date soon. you know what? i like the fact that although you have had goten only 2 revews you are still willing to continue your story.
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Reviewed By: Kimsy Lou On: September 01, 2005 17:22 CDT
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Hey, I love this story! Please keep going with it because it's really getting interesting. Update soon, I can't wait!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows(not logged in) On: August 28, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great story very interesting and intruiging. I hope you keep up the good work. In all three chapters a few misspelled words even though it might seem I messed up here it is 12 am here and so I am just mentioning this. Great story by the way keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens next!! -InTheShadows.
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