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Reviewed By: Some person who didn't sign in On: January 18, 2006 14:21 CST
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Great chapter! Glad to see you're up and running again. Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 13:42 CST
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I just love your writing syle in this story.You paint very realistic scenes and the characters are very real in their actions and thoughts.I love Heero and Wufei and I think Duo is right that they should shag and get it over with.You have so much going on and when you read you feel like Wufei and you just want to know whats happening.I cant wait to find out about the stick,the strange tattoo, and Trieze's part in the story.Please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: January 16, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter within another day it's amazing. I liked this chapter. In fact I was only grossed out on one occasion the part that went "leaving a good deal of flesh behind and a numb feeling" that was pretty sick. And I let my mind run away from me because I swear I heard a little 1x5x13 triangle in there and I also heard some jealousy when Heero replied "With?" Oh yes I love Wufei with both of those boys I refuse to choose either. I can't wait to find out what all this mystery is about.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reviewing Chapter 11. Oh I can't believe that a friggin' cliffhanger, you know those things are evil. Well besides that evilness I love this chapter a lot. I liked the tension between Heero and Wufei. I just love those boys. And was it just me or was there some fluff going on between Trowa and Quatre? Poor thing is going to have some brusies.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reviewing Chapter Ten. Yea you updated and with two chapters. I'm about to read the second chapter but I wanted to review them seperatly. This whole secret thing is starting to get me antsy I know something was up when Duo took that pause before answering Wufei. And finally they let Wufei do something then sit in the back seat it was a slow process but I don't think Heero liked it very much. I liked this chapter a lot and I hope the next is just as good.
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Title: YEAH!!!
Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally two chapters to praise!! but what is with the cliff hanger...........:( a gotta know the rest .now i'll never rest easy. Still loving the pace, storyline and dialogue. Keep writing .Keep updating and don't keep us waiting..........too long for the next fab chapt.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came back hoping you'd have updates but no such luck. Please don't tell me you gave it up, it was starting to become one of my favorite 1x5 fics. I get the chills everytime I read this fic and I mean the good kind. I really hope you continue soon, I'll keep an eye out.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing stuff!!!..........Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter. Clever dialect and neat story line............and the mystery makes it all the more compelling. Update soon please :)
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Reviewed By: Tianaki On: September 23, 2005 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is extremely well-written. I can find almost no errors, and the story is captivating and moves at a nice pace. please keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: I_malive On: September 23, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I've been looking for a yaoi Wufei centered fic for a while. I can't wait for the 1X5 loving, or to find out who "she" is, I have a suspicion but I won't say. Anyway I look forward to more soon.
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 13:52 CDT
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Oh my gosh.This fic just gets better and better.I love the tension going on between Heero and Wufei.Just like Wufei I'm dying to know what is going on and what is up with the stick.I'll be checking back whenever possible for updates so please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Davr On: September 17, 2005 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite enjoyable so far - I'm checking back every day to see if there's more. (It would be nice to see more before I have to go back to work Monday - hint, hint.)
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Reviewed By: Aubergine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 21:18 CDT
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I love how this fanfic is AU, but everyone is still in character. In fact, I think the characterization is a lot better than a lot of fics that take place in the canon timeline. Duo's sociable without being stupid, Heero's determined without being a rock, Quatre is polite and friendly without being a pushover, and Wufei's difficult but not an ass. And your warnings of character bashing of so far unwarranted, in the series, Relena is naive, self-absorbed, but well-meaning. She's that in this fic too. It's lovely how you don't cave into GW stereotypes. I think your writing technique is wonderful too. You manage to avoid cliffhangers (which are really annoying), but you keep my interest piqued. All around, a lovely job. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 14:37 CDT
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I love this story so far. There are so many mysteries to solve and I can't help but question who Wufei really is.Please keep writing soon
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Reviewed By: chantygyal On: September 02, 2005 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This storyline is very interesting so far. I'm enjoying the fact that yu have kept the personalities of each character as from the original series making their responses to situations laughable and enjoyable all at the same time. Please continue with it. I await the rest of twist and turns this story will take.
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