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Reviewed By: im_alive On: December 20, 2006 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful wonderful fic. I don't mind that it's long it's worth it and makes it so much more interesting. I love that sence so much it wasn't over done nor under done it was perfect.
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: December 20, 2006 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I like this fic! I especially liked how you wrote the lemon. With them both being ackward and all, but they're hormones dictating what to do. I also like how Duo gives them the chance anyway, even though everyone knows how it'll end. Poor Trowa though. Confused little soldier that he is. Hopefully he learns from this though ^_~ update soon please!
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Reviewed By: orangeflips [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 18:20 CST
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OMGSMUT. Whoooo! *fans* Trowa, poor Trowa. All he was doing was following the directions, andand... he was going to the bad guys! Gah. Loooovee it. You're wonderful. PS. Wasn't With You another title of a fic you wrote?
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: December 17, 2006 08:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, ignore that style of writing thing in my previous review, I think you write better than a two, I hit a wrong key.
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: December 17, 2006 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
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uggg...so wonderful...Yeah I love this story (espcially this awesome chapter), and let me tell you there is nothing wrong with it's length. Long stories as well written and fun as yours are good things. As always, can't wait for your next update, hope your muses keep you inspired.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 22:05 CST
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Hey, good gay smut is hard to find (not really, but really liked the chappies up to here, and now this one too). Now to see if more goodness will be available soon, update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Period. There were a few discrepancies though. When Wufei and Heero headed for the Call Room after Mariemaia, Wufei was grateful for years of track training. But I thought earlier it was said the coach *wanted* him on the team but he never actually joined? Just a thought. And I'm severely pissed at Trowa, just to let you know. Maybe if he'd open his eyes to Quatre, he'd understand. Lol. And exactly how old is Duo? It doesn't make sense he'd name himself after a tragedy unless he experienced it. Plus he was in that photo at the museum. It had to be him. Suspicious...My mind is working overtime now! Lol! Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: December 12, 2006 17:14 CST
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So awesome really really can't wait for more. So lucky I'm all giddy otherwise I might have thrown a fit about that cut off. But I can wait and I loved the title. I'm really hating Wufei's family though.
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Reviewed By: Kwan On: December 12, 2006 01:44 CST
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Really enjoying this so far, even if I don't review every chapter. I really like your play on Wufei's name. However, just FYI, it's the characters that don't make sense, not necessarily the pronounciation/syllable combination. The character for 'five' wouldn't be used, but other characters pronounced "wu" might be. I still like it, but not for the same reason you described. :)
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: December 11, 2006 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God. I'm torn between the fact that Wufei and Heero are hopefully going all the way in the next chapter (YES!!!!), and all the ways this could go wrong. For instance, does that door actually lock? After all, both Heero and Zhao opened it and interrupted people, and this would be a very bad time to be interrupted. What if his aunt was lying when she said it was soundproof and someone hears them, or maybe they're being monitored on cameras and someone's watching them. Or, they might have people come upon them when they're still naked and together in bed after the fact. Whatever can and will go wrong, let me just reiterate the YAY!!!! for the lemon. In the marriage, well I just hope they get Wufei out of it, but (unless you Meiran out of a closet somewhere) I'm betting on Relena for the bride. After all, it's a politcal match and they did have to drag her there. I hope we see more of Zhao. He is just delightfully nasty, and dang he comes off so far as a evil sort of cool. I knew that Wufei's name was not a well chosen one by the creators, but the way you integrated that into the story, was just...wow. Your plot is just amazingly well thought out and hard to guess. I love this story (kind of sad it's going to end soon) and can't wait for more to come (after the marriage stuff and family stuff, we still have two factions of war after him and his mystical "powers" to deal with).
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not logged in) On: December 11, 2006 16:01 CST
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Sex!!!! Nooooo!!! You should have finished it!!! -sobs- I am going to be dying now! I just really hope that noone walks in. That would suck monkey balls...like seriously. And wtf?!?! Trowa? The main Guardian? I mean like....holy shit. Heero is going to get the gig again isn't he? Because if he doesn't, that would suck even more. Did I mention that Duo is seriously fucked in the head? He does all this crazy shit and then he starts going on like a fucking jester. (Never mind that I can tell someone I am going to kill them with a big ole Cheshire cat smile on my face and mean every word.....) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! What is Fei's grandpa going to say when Wu-bear tells him that he slep with Heero? Or that Triez tried to rape him?! Oh the blashphemy! Lol. It's my new favorite word...sorry. OKay, I gotta go, I have to do a report on Depression and Suicide. Kinda funny because I am ot depressed or suicidal in anyway..... Ja!
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Reviewed By: gahhhh On: December 11, 2006 05:44 CST
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i don't know what to say, but i love the story. ha.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: December 07, 2006 14:06 CST
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That was great but seemed a little short. I'm very happy for your art stuff hope to see it. Anyway I have a big feeling that the family Wufei hoped to have is actually going to be a nightmare if his aunt is anything to go by. I already don't like her and she hasn't even said much. As for Trowa I can't believe he did what he did job or not. It's just one more thing to put against the guardians and Wufei's trust in them, Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: November 26, 2006 15:51 CST
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Yes! Gotta love the wonderful 1x5ness! Oh, we are so close to meeting Wufei's family, and I just can't wait! I also think that Hilde was justified in what she said to Duo, and that you wrote that particular scene well and in-character.
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Reviewed By: orangeflips [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 19:20 CST
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Why does it keep on cutting off my review? I also wanted to say that I completely love Hilde. The way you portrayed her seems so REAL. I mean, I'd be scare to death if my boyfriend handled a knife like that too!
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