| "Love Hina: Once Again" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 20:55 CDT
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oh, nice useage of character personalities! i actually can see Motoko refering to Kanako as "the Evil One" for what she(kanako) did to her(motoko) back then but i've got to say, writing in the personalities of someone else's characters is really hard, isn't it? kudoes to you for pulling it off sucessfully! Tenchi's sis from ryo-ohki?
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 19:30 CST
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nice chapter! loved inuyasha's "sit" parts... they're pretty much his entire part in this, weren't they? wait, Inuyasha's gonna kill rei?
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 17:34 CDT
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Nicely done..... Is the OVA Tenchi in Toyko? other then that I love reading this story...... and if you're wondering about my lack of neumerical values, i just havent gotten used to them again......
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 22:01 CDT
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Keep it up..... I like it, but i feel like i've read it in the past....... oh, well..... sorry for not reviewing, but i've been....... busy with prep school and other annoying stuff.....
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Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: VooDooDragon On: September 08, 2005 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good and even better that someone remembered that part of the manga where Kanako had her way with Motoko. Keep up the good work and let nothing deter you from writin this story.
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