| "28 Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: 28 Stars
Reviewed By: Webtester01(not logged in) On: August 27, 2009 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I reread this story and really enjoyed it again. I look forward to the sequel.
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Reviewed By: ShiniNeko On: September 06, 2007 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Taku....I come here from Y-Gallery and I find out it's still not finished *chuckle* *pokes at repeatedly* Moooooore? :D
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You continue to amaze me with your stories. I look forward the the second part now that they seem to have shattered the dragonball they were in while trying to fuse. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: evil_francesca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:38 CDT
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I've been re-reading your chapters again! I've got them all saved on my computer XD I'm looking fowards to the second part. We've gotten all these hints from you to some unknown and upcoming plot twist, and I can't wait to see what it is. (Though the fighting, the smexing, and the fighting again is always enjoyable between these two) :D
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Reviewed By: ginia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice! This was really entertaining read and I look forward to your starting up with part 2.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: May 24, 2006 21:25 CDT
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Oh, no! They broke the dragon balls! Or did they? Great chapter! I look forward to the next one!! Keep up the writing.
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Reviewed By: Hazard13 On: May 24, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I want to pay you a compliment for your great fic! It's one of my favorite stories. But what happened now in Chapter 18? O__O You took an unexpected turn with your story and really surprised me. Very good! Keep up, please! I really want to know what happens next!^^
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Title: *fans face* Phew...
Reviewed By: evil_francesca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker* Silly Vegeta. XD Very sexy chapter Pies.
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Title: continuing to be great
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: January 31, 2006 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This continues to be enjoyable each time I get a new email saying there's a new chappie. I can't wait to see what develops next with our new couple, in terms of exploring their relationship. Looking back on the eps, poor Goku really didn't want to throw that spirit bomb to kill Buu with Veggie in the way, and he was willing to stay fused so Vegeta could live. Very romantic, huh? Even THEN he couldn't stand the thought of Vegeta getting hurt.
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Reviewed By: evil_francesca [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the new chapter Pies! Kinda like strip poker-meets-Saiyan hormones *snickers* It was a wonderful chapter. I like Vegeta's obstinence in everything ^^
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Reviewed By: enigma45 On: January 22, 2006 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this pic. It's such a great idea! and I love that when ever they need somthing it just pops up ^^ Can't wait for the next update byes
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Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I continue to enjoy each update of this. Considering this is the first story that sold me on Yaoi, particularly Gok/vegeta. It's a shame they took it off FF.net because it's a terrific fanfiction. The idea of Goku livign in the dragon balls is a very original idea I've not seen before. Please keep it up, okay? I can't wait to see what they are training for, and what Goku has to keep secret from Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: tryniamerin On: December 20, 2005 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this on FF/net till they took it down! I'm always continued to be impressed with what you come up with. The rating system here is hard to figure out though!
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Reviewed By: Kinniku God [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Certainly never read anything like it before ;o) It's great to read and quite unpredictable, really interested in what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Taiyono [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not entirely sure why their in a dragonball but I love the story. Keep up the good work.
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