| "Exploring Nerima" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Excellent.
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. Great. Astounding. There are so many adjectives that I can place, but they won't fit in one review. This fic is hilarious, and well-scripted, sex aside. That said, there's only one problem that has become an annoyance. The word is tongue, bud. Not lounge. It's a little thing, I know, and it may not be your fault. Still, you need to find out what's going on and fix it. Provide the next chapter soon, and let's see if we can't turn that single, lone nine into a ten.
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Reviewed By: Oldwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 08:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looking good so far. Looks clean technically as well as bing a highly enjoyable read. Look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: DrewB On: April 21, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, pretty good. I can see Ranma and Akane getting off on screaming at each other. PWSP indeed. Only problem I see is that you seem to use "longue" when you mean to use "tongue". Maybe Word is correcting it automatically? Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 23:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad. I look forward to more developments.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
snrk... nice PWSP(Porn With Some Plot). Not a whole lot, but a little. Hot, and not badly written. For a lemon, I give it a 9 ^^
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Reviewed By: me On: October 25, 2005 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story! liked it a lot! keep the good work up and update soon!
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