| "Just a Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: AMAZING!!!
Reviewed By: milleniumslacker2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the most amazing Dragon Ball story that I have ever read. I sat down and read all the chapters in one sitting. I can't wait for you to finish it.
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Title: sheesh!
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bra finally gets what she wants and now she doesn't want it. no wonder we girls are called pychopathes we don't know what we wnat! really good story!
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Title: Amazing :)
Reviewed By: Mandie On: September 12, 2009 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it sooo much... i have never been much into a story i actually wished it was part of the dragon ball gt :) oh do u think i could get the last chapter sent to me at my sis email cherrelle09mhs@hotmail thanks so much...keep up the great work :D
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 23:23 CDT
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This is the first Goten/Bra story I have read (I generally stick to B/Vs) but I am liking it so far. Part of me wondered why Vegeta didn't try harder to beat the stuffing out of Goten when he came across him and Bra, but then again, maybe he really didn't want to hurt his little girl and the 'I'm going to disown you' stuff was just to save face. I do like the interaction between the other family members on both sides; the bit with Vegeta asking Bulma to go away with him was very sweet. :} I agree with Michelle Lynn - I would definitely like to see some interaction between Goku and Vegeta about all of this. I can see Goku just wanting what's best for both of their children, whether or not they decided to be together. Oh, and I actually appreciated your slant on why Goku was constantly gone, off doing his own thing. That it wasn't his decision was a nice touch; it always irritated me that he'd just take off and be gone for years at a time. All in all, I am looking forward to your next chapter. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: Michelle Lynn On: March 09, 2008 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! I have actually read ALL 20 CHAPTERS! & I really think that you have done a quality job on the fanfic so far. It is charming, exciting, & interesting! I really hope you update asap, & maybe you could tell your fans when you will be updating, its just curtious :) But anywho my favorite part of the fic so far is how you are incorporating other characters from DBZ into your fanfic, which makes everything much more believable. Fics with only 2 or 3 characters in the whole entire thing are just plain boring! I absolutely loved loved loved how Vegita asked Bulma to complete the bond between them, that made my heart melt!!! ^.^ It would be awesome if you had a chapter about perhaps a convo between Goku & Vegita after the big blowup, cmon how funny would THAT be? I am sooo happy that there are still peeps out there writting fanfiction about DBZ, bc really it was aired awhile ago. KEEP WRITTING! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: subu(not logged in) On: March 07, 2008 14:55 CST
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I like your fic, although you could perhaps get more in to the thoughts the main charaters have, you know their fears,uncertainties etc. maybe you could write it like some mother,daughter conversation or something. I can imagine on that age, love is still difficult and needs a lot of thinking. but still, the story is great. please continue.
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Reviewed By: GreyFox23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i love it!
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Reviewed By: Renae W. On: February 22, 2008 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this! Out of all the others i've read (or started reading) none of them compares to yours! Absolutely genius! Keep it up!
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Title: ch 17 discovery
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy not logged On: February 09, 2008 16:24 CST
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Wow, what a way for Vegeta to find out, man Goten should start praying now, lol.
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Reviewed By: subu(not logged in) On: December 16, 2007 09:24 CST
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very nice story, I haven't read many GB stories, but this one is one of the best.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever gonna update any of your stories? |
Reviewed By: Corky On: December 29, 2002 01:40 CST
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i luv your fic so far you should update more often it is to hard to wait |
Reviewed By: Jess124 On: November 17, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fanfic! I like the way you layed out this story, you really had me hooked! I really love Bra/Goten fics, they really make a cute couple. Hurry with the updates! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2002 22:17 CST
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Hey, cute fic! It's nice to see romance stories involving the demi-saiyans...I see you found mm.org, kewl site, huh? |
